Hey man! I am a big fan of your work and I wanted and would like you to have a version translated into other languages, especially pt br (my native language), as it would be easier for me to read, and also for other people who like yours work :D
you need to download winrar to extract the ZIP file, then just open the HTML file called index in a browser, or alternatively it's very easy to just play it in a browser directly from the itch.io page I really hope this fixes your problem <3
when you finish a chapter you get the option to go back to the shortcut chapter selection menu and there you can jump right into your desired chapter or reset from the start
that dream thressome with the dad and brother I love it!!!, I also love the new model of the uncle, and that new character troy too will he also have a sex scene with the protagonist?
Keep it up man I really enjoy reading your work can't wait for the next update! :>
Troy might make a few appearances here and there in future chapters, nothing is set in stone and once I start writing anything can happen, so please keep checking back for updates because there will be a lot more in the future, thank you <3
Wow love the new update and wow didn't expect the threesome with brother and dad, so I'm guessing the next one is the uncle and dad? Oh I'm super excited to see it
it doesn't necessarily count as the protagonist's first threesome since it was all a dream and I can't confirm or deny the second part of your comment :p
at this point I can't afford an editor, I had many people reach out to me since I started this visual novel to offer help, but I can never let myself inconvenience them to such extent, especially when there is so much to go through, hopefully in the future if people support my Patreon I can pay someone to help me in that regard, in the meantime I really hope it's not too distracting and my writing style doesn't break the immersion too much <3
Honestly, you could put me on the list of people willing to help. It's really not too big of a hassle to help write or edit, especially with an interesting project.
despite the off kilter and unconventional 2000-s writing style you seem like an exceedingly intelligent and lucid person. that's all i have to say. i wish you the best of luck with your subsequent works.
Hey I really love how the story is going the characters fits in so much, but can I ask when are you gonna go and post a new chapter? This is really good im addicted.
in a few days, I talked about it in the new devlog, also thank you I really try my best to make these characters interesting and I'm glad you like what you read so far <3
i love i love i looveeee this so much!! I remember literally a week ago i finished downloading the v0.1.3 and thought "well that was satisfying! Guess we'll wait for the next update next month" and NOPE. it updates every other day!! Keep up the good work! ^^ I just hope coding,writing in the span of 2 days is not too stressful for you ><
you know what, even if it was stressful just reading wonderful comments like this lights a fire under me and reinvigorates me to write some more, I'm so happy every time someone leave me a lovely comment like this thank you so much <3
Oh right before I forget! There was actually some inconsistency in differentiating between the brother and the dad icon. For example in Chapter 3, it's clear that the father has a "star" shape on his forehead, yet his normal icon has a scar on his face, not the "star" shape. The scar face icon most likely belonged to the brother as seen in Chapter 2 CG.
Basically, I just wanna point out that the dad icon is actually the brother icon as well lol.
you need to extract the files when you download it, there will be an HTML link called index you run that and it will open in a browser for you to play, I hope this helps
currently writing it, I was going to say it's gonna be up tomorrow but we know damn well when I start working on it I'll have it up in a couple hours lol
you can send me a tip when downloading the game, for now my patreon is not up yet, I'm very appreciative of the fact you thought of sending me a tip it's very kind of you <3
Surprisingly that's one of the few games that I intended to start playing but somehow forgot completely, I wish I did to be able to understand your reference lol
I just wanted to ask; is the more romantic route with the brother AND the father or just one or the other? Personally, I think it would be great if it were both.
everyone is on the table in both routes, the only difference is that one will have more affectionate encounters, and the other will be more raunchy and explicit/kinky, both routes will have every character available and will eventually have you do many things with all of them.
ah I love it the older brother was sooo sweet, and the uncle sex scene was super hot, but I feel bother cause the sex with the uncle was a little too rough cause he's drunk , hope in the next update the uncle will be a little gentle since he's sobber but still dominant, anyway exited to see more:3
The uncle is a complex character you've only seen a small part of him, hopefully in the future updates you will get to know him more, and you'll be surprised of how much raunchy and messed up he can get lol
since it's still very early in the divergent routes there is no need for a warning, you can get to the end and restart the chapter in a couple minutes, later on when I build on this more, I will put a disclaimer <3
To be honest, I feel kinda conflicted about the uncle scene.
On one hand, the scene itself was pretty hot and I liked it. It was rough and just fucking with no feelings, but still enjoyable. On the other hand, it felt kinda out of nowhere, and after all the build up with the dad and brother - which were a lot more fond and affectionate -, I felt kinda bad doing it with the uncle. Plus the fact that the dad was right there, sleeping close by when it happened, made me feel kinda guilty :(
If I wasn't already so attached to the dad and bro, I probably wouldn't mind giving myself to the uncle. But since I already like them so much, and would prefer to have a more affectionate relationship instead of just random sex, I'd prefer to be able to focus only on them and leave the uncle for maybe a different playthrough.
I understand developing the game takes time, and it might be a while before that's possible, but that's how I feel about it :)
I wish you offer us more option and maybe you could use variable more.
Also i really wish we could choose who get to have our v card rather than the uncle forcing us. Afterall it should be okay since in the beginning of chapter 4 we already resolved our determination.
You should let us to be able to focus on only 1 person or be as poly/free as possible. I personally wish to only focus on the brother and give my all to him :D
So despite the hotness of the situation with the uncle, its really making me feel displeasure. Hope you can see my advice and it can be of some help :)
You have to take in consideration this is literally my first ever visual novel, I write create and code everything by myself, and have been doing this for almost every day since release when the game looked like text over a plain white screen, if you look at the game now it's so much more pleasant to look at than before and I learned those things after posting v0.1.1 , I'm still learning new ways to code a prettier looking visual novel and how to branch a story , I'm not very experienced in multiple path stories it is very complicated and take a lot of time to write and since I wanted to give people more content often I chose to share single path stories instead of making you wait a long time before I update the game, but rest assured I do consider giving the player more choices but it will come with time please be patient with me because so far this project has been taking a lot of my time. hopefully one day if I ever make a patreon I will have funds to hire people to proofread/cowrite with me, for now it's just me alone having a lot of fun creating something for you guys to enjoy hopefully <3
It is really enjoyable and i particularly (as i said earlier) like the brother personality so much.
Hope you will be able to improve your game to perfection :)
(Also despite me saying you should do this and that, i will be that one hypocrite that will tell you that you shouldn't follow other advice if it doesn't suit you otherwise you will eventually be bored because you will gradually see the game isn't like what you initially want it to be if you keep trying to meet all the expectation. Just write and do what you enjoy with your game, this game is yours afterall :D)
Very good game friend, I like the theme of being able to have sex with a member of the family of the protagonist although I have some questions for AshTrick, will we ever have the possibility of choosing to be the Top if we have sex? I really like that the father and the brother are strong and dominant men and I would love to be fucked by them but it would also be hot if we can dominate them and fuck their ass
I don't know if this might sound rude or annoying, but can I suggest a scene? What if the father comes home from work being stressed, tired, and has severe back pain and the son offers to give him a back massage which the father accepts but what the son did not expect was that the father would undress completely and lie on his stomach leaving his ass completely exposed and the son would begin to massage his back and this is where the protagonist would decide if his hands would go down to massage his father's ass (which would lead to a scene of the father being bottom) or give him a normal massage until the father turns around and wants his abdomen to be massaged down to his cock (which would lead to a scene of the father being top), sorry if you don't like the idea
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when's the new update
I just posted the latest update, and it's a FAT one with 3 sex scenes
Hey man! I am a big fan of your work and I wanted and would like you to have a version translated into other languages, especially pt br (my native language), as it would be easier for me to read, and also for other people who like yours work :D
My Twitter dms are open, fee free to reach me there <3
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Woah <3
umm tried downloading this on android (on chrome) and it doesnt work.. I dont think android chrome lets u do the zip stuff :(
you need to download winrar to extract the ZIP file, then just open the HTML file called index in a browser, or alternatively it's very easy to just play it in a browser directly from the itch.io page I really hope this fixes your problem <3
i play this just to see it's been updated 1 day ago
I had to take a bit of time to write a longer chapter I hope you like the newest update <3
I was gonna be pissed if the first threesome wasn't with the uncle but it turned out be a dream lmao
I hope you didn't spoil things for people who haven't gotten to that part yet
is there a reset
when you finish a chapter you get the option to go back to the shortcut chapter selection menu and there you can jump right into your desired chapter or reset from the start
that dream thressome with the dad and brother I love it!!!, I also love the new model of the uncle, and that new character troy too will he also have a sex scene with the protagonist?
Keep it up man I really enjoy reading your work can't wait for the next update! :>
Troy might make a few appearances here and there in future chapters, nothing is set in stone and once I start writing anything can happen, so please keep checking back for updates because there will be a lot more in the future, thank you <3
Lmao idk if i should be happy or what because this VN cured my ED, no joke. Anyway, great vn cant wait for the next updates! <3
lol that's good to hear, thank you so much for the positive feedback <3
Wow love the new update and wow didn't expect the threesome with brother and dad, so I'm guessing the next one is the uncle and dad? Oh I'm super excited to see it
it doesn't necessarily count as the protagonist's first threesome since it was all a dream and I can't confirm or deny the second part of your comment :p
I adore the story, but as a writer too the writing mistakes kinda throws me out of the immersion. Do you plan on getting an editor or beta?
at this point I can't afford an editor, I had many people reach out to me since I started this visual novel to offer help, but I can never let myself inconvenience them to such extent, especially when there is so much to go through, hopefully in the future if people support my Patreon I can pay someone to help me in that regard, in the meantime I really hope it's not too distracting and my writing style doesn't break the immersion too much <3
Honestly, you could put me on the list of people willing to help. It's really not too big of a hassle to help write or edit, especially with an interesting project.
I wish I knew how to make stories like you. Keep it up! So cool!
thank you <3
So when will the update be out?
I just posted a new devlog please read it, but don't worry in a few days <3
despite the off kilter and unconventional 2000-s writing style you seem like an exceedingly intelligent and lucid person. that's all i have to say. i wish you the best of luck with your subsequent works.
thank you, first time someone describes me as lucid, I love that <3
Hey I really love how the story is going the characters fits in so much, but can I ask when are you gonna go and post a new chapter? This is really good im addicted.
in a few days, I talked about it in the new devlog, also thank you I really try my best to make these characters interesting and I'm glad you like what you read so far <3
Congratulation on your first few patreons! ;-)
thank you so much, it is really humbling seeing people willingly support my work on Patreon and I'm beyond grateful to each and everyone of them <3
you deserve it if i wasnt in a tight situation i would support you right now
i love i love i looveeee this so much!! I remember literally a week ago i finished downloading the v0.1.3 and thought "well that was satisfying! Guess we'll wait for the next update next month" and NOPE. it updates every other day!! Keep up the good work! ^^ I just hope coding,writing in the span of 2 days is not too stressful for you ><
you know what, even if it was stressful just reading wonderful comments like this lights a fire under me and reinvigorates me to write some more, I'm so happy every time someone leave me a lovely comment like this thank you so much <3
Oh right before I forget! There was actually some inconsistency in differentiating between the brother and the dad icon. For example in Chapter 3, it's clear that the father has a "star" shape on his forehead, yet his normal icon has a scar on his face, not the "star" shape. The scar face icon most likely belonged to the brother as seen in Chapter 2 CG.
Basically, I just wanna point out that the dad icon is actually the brother icon as well lol.
that was a great chapter wonder what happens next
You're going to have to wait for the next chapter, but I just updated the other part of chapter 5, I hope you like it <3
dad's knot mmmm
Uncle knot too, soon when I update.
Sir!!, I can't run this game on browser and when I'm download it's can't open in browser too.
I try run html file but it need JavaScript.
If you know how help me please, I'm really looking for this kind of game for long : (
you need to extract the files when you download it, there will be an HTML link called index you run that and it will open in a browser for you to play, I hope this helps
for the sake of consistency I reworked the uncle scene and gave him a knot too
I'd have to change so many early chapters i don't know, maybe he'll have one in future updates
Wow that fast
<3
Love the new update of the dad super hot I sense an incoming threesome with the uncle im super excited!!
we need a new uupdate
currently writing it, I was going to say it's gonna be up tomorrow but we know damn well when I start working on it I'll have it up in a couple hours lol
So like soon since your gonna post it or tomorrow so ik if I should go sleep.
it will be live in less than an hour
Dude, the game is awesome. Send you my hugs.
fuck yeah
this is very likely to happen in the near future chapters, very very likely
Do you have patreon? how do i tip owo...
you can send me a tip when downloading the game, for now my patreon is not up yet, I'm very appreciative of the fact you thought of sending me a tip it's very kind of you <3
Lol I just got immediately reminded of sileo when the main character asked tai for a big tip LMAO
Surprisingly that's one of the few games that I intended to start playing but somehow forgot completely, I wish I did to be able to understand your reference lol
I just wanted to ask; is the more romantic route with the brother AND the father or just one or the other? Personally, I think it would be great if it were both.
everyone is on the table in both routes, the only difference is that one will have more affectionate encounters, and the other will be more raunchy and explicit/kinky, both routes will have every character available and will eventually have you do many things with all of them.
When are we going to get a lovemaking/sex scene with the father? I mean a proper anal sex not just oral.
I'm sure in the next chapters there will be plenty of that, I just need to get around to writing them.
Good to know! :)
Just finished updating the latest version again because It had many typos.
Ash
the uncle is good do more with him
oh don't you worry, he's going to appear again.
ah I love it the older brother was sooo sweet, and the uncle sex scene was super hot, but I feel bother cause the sex with the uncle was a little too rough cause he's drunk , hope in the next update the uncle will be a little gentle since he's sobber but still dominant, anyway exited to see more:3
The uncle is a complex character you've only seen a small part of him, hopefully in the future updates you will get to know him more, and you'll be surprised of how much raunchy and messed up he can get lol
since it's still very early in the divergent routes there is no need for a warning, you can get to the end and restart the chapter in a couple minutes, later on when I build on this more, I will put a disclaimer <3
NEW UPDATE ALREADY ???
I hope you enjoy playing the new route on 4th chapter <3
To be honest, I feel kinda conflicted about the uncle scene.
On one hand, the scene itself was pretty hot and I liked it. It was rough and just fucking with no feelings, but still enjoyable. On the other hand, it felt kinda out of nowhere, and after all the build up with the dad and brother - which were a lot more fond and affectionate -, I felt kinda bad doing it with the uncle. Plus the fact that the dad was right there, sleeping close by when it happened, made me feel kinda guilty :(
If I wasn't already so attached to the dad and bro, I probably wouldn't mind giving myself to the uncle. But since I already like them so much, and would prefer to have a more affectionate relationship instead of just random sex, I'd prefer to be able to focus only on them and leave the uncle for maybe a different playthrough.
I understand developing the game takes time, and it might be a while before that's possible, but that's how I feel about it :)
Look out to the next update in a couple hours, I think you're going to like it
Honestly you're amazing. Thanks for the great game and your hard work <3
nothing makes me happier than uplifting positive comments like this I'm so glad you're enjoying my work <3
Okay, i am gonna be really honest here.
The game is really good with a decent story ^^
The art is also pleasing :)
But...
I wish you offer us more option and maybe you could use variable more.
Also i really wish we could choose who get to have our v card rather than the uncle forcing us. Afterall it should be okay since in the beginning of chapter 4 we already resolved our determination.
You should let us to be able to focus on only 1 person or be as poly/free as possible. I personally wish to only focus on the brother and give my all to him :D
So despite the hotness of the situation with the uncle, its really making me feel displeasure. Hope you can see my advice and it can be of some help :)
Yeah, I agree with you. I wish I could choose who I interact with and not have to do anything with who I don't want to.
You have to take in consideration this is literally my first ever visual novel, I write create and code everything by myself, and have been doing this for almost every day since release when the game looked like text over a plain white screen, if you look at the game now it's so much more pleasant to look at than before and I learned those things after posting v0.1.1 , I'm still learning new ways to code a prettier looking visual novel and how to branch a story , I'm not very experienced in multiple path stories it is very complicated and take a lot of time to write and since I wanted to give people more content often I chose to share single path stories instead of making you wait a long time before I update the game, but rest assured I do consider giving the player more choices but it will come with time please be patient with me because so far this project has been taking a lot of my time. hopefully one day if I ever make a patreon I will have funds to hire people to proofread/cowrite with me, for now it's just me alone having a lot of fun creating something for you guys to enjoy hopefully <3
Of course will be sticking around with ur game ^^
It is really enjoyable and i particularly (as i said earlier) like the brother personality so much.
Hope you will be able to improve your game to perfection :)
(Also despite me saying you should do this and that, i will be that one hypocrite that will tell you that you shouldn't follow other advice if it doesn't suit you otherwise you will eventually be bored because you will gradually see the game isn't like what you initially want it to be if you keep trying to meet all the expectation. Just write and do what you enjoy with your game, this game is yours afterall :D)
If im gonna be honest. I really like the brother the most.
then you're going to love the update I just put out lol
Very good game friend, I like the theme of being able to have sex with a member of the family of the protagonist although I have some questions for AshTrick, will we ever have the possibility of choosing to be the Top if we have sex? I really like that the father and the brother are strong and dominant men and I would love to be fucked by them but it would also be hot if we can dominate them and fuck their ass
hopefully in the future I can revisit the early chapters and create a top route.
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far <3
I don't know if this might sound rude or annoying, but can I suggest a scene? What if the father comes home from work being stressed, tired, and has severe back pain and the son offers to give him a back massage which the father accepts but what the son did not expect was that the father would undress completely and lie on his stomach leaving his ass completely exposed and the son would begin to massage his back and this is where the protagonist would decide if his hands would go down to massage his father's ass (which would lead to a scene of the father being bottom) or give him a normal massage until the father turns around and wants his abdomen to be massaged down to his cock (which would lead to a scene of the father being top), sorry if you don't like the idea
Naked Father Reference Image
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