Hey ! Must say I like it, will there be any art to show a bit more all the kinky scenes ? :p And just one thing, it's quite hard to read, there's not a lot of punctuation, so it's sometimes a bit of a hassle. But hot nonetheless :p
Hope you're feeling better! I just wanted to let you know that I love your content so much. I'm kinda broke at the moment, but I'll donate whatever I can to keep this GN going!!!
I'm very sick, I felt under the weather last week and thought I was getting better but It's gotten worse, I'm trying to work on this but I literally can barely move, I really hope you guys can wait until I feel a little better
Can someone help me with my problem? I play this using the web and recently i cant play it because of an error that says something about not having a "valid storage adaptors"? I am sorry for the inconvenience
The warning indicates that the Player's web-browser is either:
a. So old it doesn't support the local storage functionality required by the SugarCube engine. b. Is being run in a mode / way that restricts access to the storage functionality required.
examples: a. You can get this warning if the web-browser has been configured to disable cookies. b. Microsoft Edge will show a similar warning message if the Player is trying to view a copy of your Story HML file from their local hard-drive.
boy oh boy i'm loving this stories, i's really hard for me to just sit down and read something, mostly because i just end up sleeping from boredom, but this has captivated me to the point of not noticing time passing by, i´m completely in love with this and cant wait for more!!
(also english is not my native language so, if i whrote something wrong, sorry!)
I'm so happy to hear this, nothing motivates me more than to know what I write is captivating enough for people to get lost reading it, thank you so much
omg bestie, you're still keeping up with this ? well you know, we've read enough hot stories and visual novels my head is full of scenarios and once I start there is no end lol hope you keep enjoying this as I plan on working on it for a long time <3
Just wanted to say that I'm really liking your game so far! Just have a question. I wanted to know if there's going to be a romance in any of the routes or if it's just going to be sex (not that I'm complaining).
for now in the kinky route the protagonist id just exploring his new found fetishes and kinks so no, but in the second route there might be something in the few upcoming updates <3
just a suggestion but perhaps at the start of the game you should allow the player to choose between the characters being biologically related or step , perhaps that would be hard , but some people may be uncomfortable with the idea of incest . disregard this if it is difficult or stupid , just a thought , thanks for the had work .
That's a good suggestion but he will need to change the story a little bit for both choices and he already said he is going to make more option for the future update, so this might burdens him a little.... I think.....
Edit: oh and not to mention that he need to find new artist for the art
step or biologically won't have to alter art , but i understand it will be difficult to alter , but some people may be reluctant to play because of the intense incestuous nature of the game , including myself mind you , therefore i personally would appreciate , but i must also state that it should be low priority for the author as i am sure he is busy , and my suggestion will do little overall .
Yes more sexy time with the dad and Uncle best chapter so far I love it!! And also it's quite a shame you have to removed the art, cause of the artist and I hope you do find someone to make art commission for you might I suggest this person
thank you so much for the suggestion I will keep it in mind hopefully I can get to it very soon once I have the funds for it, but I still hope the story is still engaging enough for you <3
Hey man! I am a big fan of your work and I wanted and would like you to have a version translated into other languages, especially pt br (my native language), as it would be easier for me to read, and also for other people who like yours work :D
you need to download winrar to extract the ZIP file, then just open the HTML file called index in a browser, or alternatively it's very easy to just play it in a browser directly from the itch.io page I really hope this fixes your problem <3
when you finish a chapter you get the option to go back to the shortcut chapter selection menu and there you can jump right into your desired chapter or reset from the start
that dream thressome with the dad and brother I love it!!!, I also love the new model of the uncle, and that new character troy too will he also have a sex scene with the protagonist?
Keep it up man I really enjoy reading your work can't wait for the next update! :>
Troy might make a few appearances here and there in future chapters, nothing is set in stone and once I start writing anything can happen, so please keep checking back for updates because there will be a lot more in the future, thank you <3
Wow love the new update and wow didn't expect the threesome with brother and dad, so I'm guessing the next one is the uncle and dad? Oh I'm super excited to see it
it doesn't necessarily count as the protagonist's first threesome since it was all a dream and I can't confirm or deny the second part of your comment :p
at this point I can't afford an editor, I had many people reach out to me since I started this visual novel to offer help, but I can never let myself inconvenience them to such extent, especially when there is so much to go through, hopefully in the future if people support my Patreon I can pay someone to help me in that regard, in the meantime I really hope it's not too distracting and my writing style doesn't break the immersion too much <3
Honestly, you could put me on the list of people willing to help. It's really not too big of a hassle to help write or edit, especially with an interesting project.
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Umm is everything ok its been 1 month and no new updates?
I really hope he's ok
Hey ! Must say I like it, will there be any art to show a bit more all the kinky scenes ? :p And just one thing, it's quite hard to read, there's not a lot of punctuation, so it's sometimes a bit of a hassle. But hot nonetheless :p
Hope you're feeling better! I just wanted to let you know that I love your content so much. I'm kinda broke at the moment, but I'll donate whatever I can to keep this GN going!!!
Well if Apple says it's unspeakable and pornographic I'm all for it! :D I look forward to playing it.
Hi are you feeling any better ash?
Uncle is so hot....
Quick question I haven't started it yet but are there like scenes
"borderline incestuous"
Will the update be soon?
I'm very sick, I felt under the weather last week and thought I was getting better but It's gotten worse, I'm trying to work on this but I literally can barely move, I really hope you guys can wait until I feel a little better
omg stop working pls rest. Dont hurt yourself anymore.
no it's not because of this, I think I caught a very nasty flu, thank you so much though you're too kind <3
Can someone help me with my problem? I play this using the web and recently i cant play it because of an error that says something about not having a "valid storage adaptors"? I am sorry for the inconvenience
same
The warning indicates that the Player's web-browser is either:
a. So old it doesn't support the local storage functionality required by the SugarCube engine.
b. Is being run in a mode / way that restricts access to the storage functionality required.
examples:
a. You can get this warning if the web-browser has been configured to disable cookies.
b. Microsoft Edge will show a similar warning message if the Player is trying to view a copy of your Story HML file from their local hard-drive.
Try unblocking cookies from non-visited Websites
this is so frickin good
i enjoyed reading it;)
make more of the brother
Beautiful writing, engaging full of details and not too complicated, perfect for me who does not speak good English, continues this way
Is there a schedule for the game's updates? Or is it a "when it's done" type of thing?
Cheers
update pls
boy oh boy i'm loving this stories, i's really hard for me to just sit down and read something, mostly because i just end up sleeping from boredom, but this has captivated me to the point of not noticing time passing by, i´m completely in love with this and cant wait for more!!
(also english is not my native language so, if i whrote something wrong, sorry!)
I'm so happy to hear this, nothing motivates me more than to know what I write is captivating enough for people to get lost reading it, thank you so much
congrats on being part of lawsuit
https://kotaku.com/apple-tries-really-hard-to-get-epic-to-admit-theres-por-18468...
Calling my visual novels "unspeakable and pornographic" from now on lol
I'm curious, what program/engine was this game created with?
Twine probably
oh ok yeah that looks like it, thanks ^^
Well I swear the game it just keep getting better and better
omg bestie, you're still keeping up with this ? well you know, we've read enough hot stories and visual novels my head is full of scenarios and once I start there is no end lol hope you keep enjoying this as I plan on working on it for a long time <3
Yesss bestie I will keep up with it and with every story you put out 🥵 cause your work just keep getting better and I even followed you on twitter
Just wanted to say that I'm really liking your game so far! Just have a question. I wanted to know if there's going to be a romance in any of the routes or if it's just going to be sex (not that I'm complaining).
for now in the kinky route the protagonist id just exploring his new found fetishes and kinks so no, but in the second route there might be something in the few upcoming updates <3
Thanks for answering! And since you said that it's a no on the kinky route "for now" I'll assume you're implying it's possible in the future :)
just a suggestion but perhaps at the start of the game you should allow the player to choose between the characters being biologically related or step , perhaps that would be hard , but some people may be uncomfortable with the idea of incest . disregard this if it is difficult or stupid , just a thought , thanks for the had work .
That's a good suggestion but he will need to change the story a little bit for both choices and he already said he is going to make more option for the future update, so this might burdens him a little.... I think.....
Edit: oh and not to mention that he need to find new artist for the art
step or biologically won't have to alter art , but i understand it will be difficult to alter , but some people may be reluctant to play because of the intense incestuous nature of the game , including myself mind you , therefore i personally would appreciate , but i must also state that it should be low priority for the author as i am sure he is busy , and my suggestion will do little overall .
Im pretty sure those characters won´t be added but I like the cover art and the men in them ;3
Yes more sexy time with the dad and Uncle best chapter so far I love it!! And also it's quite a shame you have to removed the art, cause of the artist and I hope you do find someone to make art commission for you might I suggest this person
https://mobile.twitter.com/Gid_g11/media
He takes commission so give him a contact
Anyway good luck dude can't wait to see More!!
thank you so much for the suggestion I will keep it in mind hopefully I can get to it very soon once I have the funds for it, but I still hope the story is still engaging enough for you <3
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you guys are funny
when's the new update
I just posted the latest update, and it's a FAT one with 3 sex scenes
Hey man! I am a big fan of your work and I wanted and would like you to have a version translated into other languages, especially pt br (my native language), as it would be easier for me to read, and also for other people who like yours work :D
My Twitter dms are open, fee free to reach me there <3
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Woah <3
umm tried downloading this on android (on chrome) and it doesnt work.. I dont think android chrome lets u do the zip stuff :(
you need to download winrar to extract the ZIP file, then just open the HTML file called index in a browser, or alternatively it's very easy to just play it in a browser directly from the itch.io page I really hope this fixes your problem <3
i play this just to see it's been updated 1 day ago
I had to take a bit of time to write a longer chapter I hope you like the newest update <3
I was gonna be pissed if the first threesome wasn't with the uncle but it turned out be a dream lmao
I hope you didn't spoil things for people who haven't gotten to that part yet
is there a reset
when you finish a chapter you get the option to go back to the shortcut chapter selection menu and there you can jump right into your desired chapter or reset from the start
that dream thressome with the dad and brother I love it!!!, I also love the new model of the uncle, and that new character troy too will he also have a sex scene with the protagonist?
Keep it up man I really enjoy reading your work can't wait for the next update! :>
Troy might make a few appearances here and there in future chapters, nothing is set in stone and once I start writing anything can happen, so please keep checking back for updates because there will be a lot more in the future, thank you <3
Lmao idk if i should be happy or what because this VN cured my ED, no joke. Anyway, great vn cant wait for the next updates! <3
lol that's good to hear, thank you so much for the positive feedback <3
Wow love the new update and wow didn't expect the threesome with brother and dad, so I'm guessing the next one is the uncle and dad? Oh I'm super excited to see it
it doesn't necessarily count as the protagonist's first threesome since it was all a dream and I can't confirm or deny the second part of your comment :p
I adore the story, but as a writer too the writing mistakes kinda throws me out of the immersion. Do you plan on getting an editor or beta?
at this point I can't afford an editor, I had many people reach out to me since I started this visual novel to offer help, but I can never let myself inconvenience them to such extent, especially when there is so much to go through, hopefully in the future if people support my Patreon I can pay someone to help me in that regard, in the meantime I really hope it's not too distracting and my writing style doesn't break the immersion too much <3
Honestly, you could put me on the list of people willing to help. It's really not too big of a hassle to help write or edit, especially with an interesting project.
I wish I knew how to make stories like you. Keep it up! So cool!
thank you <3
So when will the update be out?
I just posted a new devlog please read it, but don't worry in a few days <3